Friday, June 13, 2008

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...let me see,

the ways i love thee, , ,
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alan pieterse
lighting Firefly
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Raynette Eitel 13 June 2008

Alan, there are moments of delight in this poem...and yet there is excess. I believe poetry should be 'boiled down to a fine crystal.' You need to boil this a bit more...but you do have some lovely images. Dont lose them. Raynette

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port elizabeth, south africa
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