Thursday, February 26, 2009

Coming Up For Air.......... Comments

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held under water
for too long
the pressure getting higher
and higher
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Nangula Immanuel 20 May 2009

Great poem! I love how the repetition of higher and harder makes it more intense, like i am the one who can't breathe. Really good! !

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~ Jon London ~ 27 February 2009

Great piece, well placed words of clear thought

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