Coming To My Senses... Comments

Creepy and clever! you always pack a punch in your last lines.

At first it seemed like a love poem but I had been forewarned of the 'halloweenish' vibes, lol. Ending seemed like a resounding thump on the head (but I liked it..I liked it, lol)

This is great! We are still laughing. Best wishes

Ahhh, your poems never cease to amaze me! I have to admit, I am a bit jealous that your poems always seem to come out exactly right. They are such a pleasure to read. Also, Thanks for your recent comment! I've been PIMming again, too.

Charles, Did you notice how I got back to 'Charles' , real quick! ... Please tell the policemen that you and I have not ever really met! I just like your writings, at least right up to that point! I know that you are joking! ... Say that you are joking! ... Please! ! ! ? B.V.A.

i literally laughed out loud at this one. Chuck, you do good work. Jake

amazing ending..what a lead up...u sure your not a series write out in LA?

this was sexy. at first. then i read on.. & well, the morbidity kicked in and it became a delectably intriguing piece of work, Chuck. good stuff.

This is VERY dark, Chuck...hope it's just your muse speaking...or do I call the cops? Bittersweet/Sweetbitter...loved it :) Jack...

Chuck, Hmmmm...me thinks the meadow may have been freshly planted! I like this a lot...it catches you off guard (ok...and scares the crap out of ya too! !) . I love the shocking ending! Hugs, Dee

A real tale of the unexpected...this is one that deserves that second read to fully appreciate the subtle but sinister tone. Excellent write. Justine.

you know, you keep us coming back for more :)

Haunting and almost elegiac, to me. Good stuff, this...

typo alert! ...3rd verse...1st line... lose the 'I' before 'that'... dan =)

What a turn around.Expect the unexpected. Loads of tallent here! Love Duncan

Great storytelling! Your words really tease the reader. Lovely. Very lovely indeed.

Trying to create some creepy Halloween poems... What do you think? - chuck