Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Coming To America Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time
when we didnt have a dime
when we lived on the streets
when it was hard to get back on our feet
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Icy rivas
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Ayesha Sartawi 30 November 2008

hello, i think you have much improved since the previous poems i have read and i quite enjoyed reading this one, but i need you to focus more on your spelling mistakes try writing your poems on microsoft word first then copying them here, because i am trying to do the same with my poems.... take care and good luck

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Hugo Sanchez 15 November 2008

muy lindo.i love your poem, keep writing...i give you a 10

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