Monday, September 11, 2006

Coming Through! Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know how some people say the
streets of heaven are paved with gold?
Don’t you think that’s a little clichéd?
I think they may have lifted that from
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Chuck Audette 12 September 2006

I can see you running over folks left and right, yelling 'it's OKAY! You're already dead! '. Sickie. -chuck

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I can't help it and I like it... when I read a piece of yours (the one relating to the cat in the hat and EAP was an exception and perfectly executed but not your usual style) , it feels as though we're sitting across a table having a conversation and these are your thoughts. Engaging your reader.... second to none, Prof. And of course I like this, and coming through, indeed. Hug across the table with more than an element of respect in there. t x

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Raynette Eitel 11 September 2006

That is, IF you get to heaven, Professor! :) But the car thing sounds great...more practical than streets of gold, except it makes the wings obsolete. Raynette

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Tracey Collins 11 September 2006

wouldn`t be nice to have the car of your dreams when yuo`re up in heaven, because We can`t afford them down on earth...

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Danny Reynolds 11 September 2006

So God's not such a meanie giving you a Lamborghini Heaven's angel's cars are whoppers While the Hell's Angels get choppers! Danny (Consciously avoiding Haiku style?)

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