Coming Out Of Voodoo Spells Comments

Hi Sulaiman, You have much very beautiful and touching phrases - finds, and this strongly is pleasant to me: '...At the far end of the crude muddy river Purging a smile of chronic guilt... Tsira

this is a pretty sweet write bro... very creepy subject, especially the talk of wolves...good job

Explosive visual imagery, wolves with annoyed souls...you reached deep here Sulaiman...Every read is an amazing journey, your words form the walls to your soul my friend, *10* Best wishes Jon.

the last five lines bring the poem home. Scary stuff, that voodoo.

Very strong poem-not much wrong with it. Well done! kat

powerful imagery - strong. I recently posted one called; magic' you might like to see. Shaun.