Wednesday, February 1, 2006

Coming On Strong Comments

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She comes on strong like a hurricane.
It makes me wonder if I am still sane.
To think that she would even look.
It is as if she reads me like a book.
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Joshua Pickron
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Neisha Williams 06 February 2006

Although this is not quite a blazon, it is still a pretty good poem, Josh. You get enough of the concept in your poem to show me that you get the point. I find myself looking forward to your poems now-especially after the train. I am anxious and nervous because I don't know what to expect from your poems. However, I am always pleasantly surprised. :)

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