Sunday, June 2, 2013

Coming Of Jesus Comments

Rating: 4.9

Jesus came, Jesus came, Jesus came for us
Jerusalem is shining bright, Jesus came for us

On the roof before the dusk, Jesus came to us
Tears roll, bare sole, song of praise, rush n rush
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Aftab Alam
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Elisha Wall 28 January 2015

What a joyful song that inspires ultimate hope! Thanks. *Birds that sung, cloud that hung, a dying curse* Thank God that Jesus came for us and for that course he died as well.

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Heather Wilkins 21 September 2014

a very thoughtful poem about the coming of Jesus well penned

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 08 June 2013

well penned, written just like a song...

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R.j. Wynn 07 June 2013

Well penned, it the bomb, to die for, great work

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Valsa George 05 June 2013

A lovely poem that can be sung with the accompaniment of a musical instrument! ! A beautiful hymn or ditty full of expectations on the glorious second coming of Jesus Christ! ! Enjoyed! !

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Neela Nath Das 04 June 2013

The second coming must be wonderful! Welcome!

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David Wood 03 June 2013

A lovely poem Aftab with hope.

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Ruby Mostazir 02 June 2013

Definitely Prophet Isha (Jesus) (PBUH) will arrive to make peace on our earth....a great poem.10

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Wahab Abdul 02 June 2013

that's the spirit.. you are there.... and that's the thing that is here.. lovely poem.. bro... very sweet and politically correct...10

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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2013

My dear Aftab, you are really a great poet of humanity, For a poet preservation of creatures are important, for the larger interest of the world. thanks.

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