Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Coming Of Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

A smoking darkness at end of
day
has fallen down
upon the deep blue
...
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Smoky Hoss
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Juan Olivarez 07 August 2013

Interesting poem In style I mean. Kinda unique good one too.

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Joseph Anderson 05 August 2013

Smoky-That is an unusual style in this, but you have vividly painted a spooked night with amazing use of imagery and a blending of all nightly things. I am gonna skip my nightly walk,

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Valerie Dohren 02 August 2013

Excellent Smoky, had a bit of a dabble myself of late with more modern formats. This is very good, a great read. Looking forward to more.

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

A wonderful poem Smoky, a great write.

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