A smoking darkness at end of
day
has fallen down
upon the deep blue
...
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Smoky-That is an unusual style in this, but you have vividly painted a spooked night with amazing use of imagery and a blending of all nightly things. I am gonna skip my nightly walk,
Excellent Smoky, had a bit of a dabble myself of late with more modern formats. This is very good, a great read. Looking forward to more.
Interesting poem In style I mean. Kinda unique good one too.