Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Coming Home. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My wall begins to crumble
Yet I fight to keep it there
Locked away from prying eyes
And those who want to stare
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Graham Jones
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Linda Ori 12 March 2006

We all build walls to protect us from being hurt. It's when they become too high to see over that our tomb is complete. Excellent read - wonderful, meaningful poem. Linda

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Russel Tanner 09 February 2006

very deep and reflective piece of writing. nice imagery. i like the phrase 'a whisper thin', its uncommon and unique. excellent work.

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