My wall begins to crumble
Yet I fight to keep it there
Locked away from prying eyes
And those who want to stare
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very deep and reflective piece of writing. nice imagery. i like the phrase 'a whisper thin', its uncommon and unique. excellent work.
We all build walls to protect us from being hurt. It's when they become too high to see over that our tomb is complete. Excellent read - wonderful, meaningful poem. Linda