Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Coming From Me Comments

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they say spoken words lead to a bond
they can bring you together as if
you were one
but if my words were spoken
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robin machorro
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Richard D. Remler 21 June 2010

Your poem carries a message worth hearing. Nicely put together. Could use a spell check, but otherwise, 'twas an enjoyable read. A bit of piercing honesty put forth in an easily understood form. Well done. Thanks for sharing. Rick

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Jordan Scown 27 May 2010

woah axed so good =D you have a gift keep it up =D Godbless

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Kristopher Delander 26 May 2010

wow i love the messege in this poem i can't wait for ur next one your a great writer

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