Coming For Happiness Comments

it was good you seam deep enough to write poems so keep going but the more life gives you the more reason you will have to write

I liked the ending! ! ! You have done a good job with it. questioning ourselves with a subtle way. Nice work! ! ! !

the poem so beautiful.............. i loved it.

It is quite good. Yet, the feel in it is missing. THe tenor of the poem is lacking. The feel of the joy is not offered. All in all, it is quite good

The poem is quite good. Yet, the feel in it is lacking. The tenor is missing. The comparisons are apt though. It is quite good, all in all

ur poem is no doubt is very nice & beautiful................ but dont mind i think too much length of the poem create difficulty for readers.... may b am right or its my wrong estimation but at all dont mind plzzzz

ur poem is no doubt very nice & beautifully composed....... but dont mind to much lenght of the poem make create difficulty for readers

if you understnad your poem much more with the reader..^_^

Bending their tall heads, Happiness the precious thing we should hold dear.Thanks for sharing.