*** Coming Back To You *** Comments

Thank you for sharing this truly tragic heart-wrenching event with us. Your beautifully presented array of powerful emotions, your loving memories were, as always, truly alive, real and impacted me deeply. Dear sweet departed young lady, could anyone have remembered you and honored your memory more sincerely than this? An artist at work, Sulaiman, to the max. Thank you, Carol

A fantastic tear jerker, a great deal of passion and love; heart warming. Another impressive write!

beautiful.............and sad

great. deep, emotional. right on the surface...that's awsome...great job. one of my favorites.

This is tragic. It's always an agony to lose someone we love, and can nature's law be thwarted by any of us? A very well laid poem with words flowing in sequence. Be strong buddy. I pray may her soul rest in peace. God Bless.

Beautiful poem. I feel for you and am sorry for what has happened. God Bless. : : Vanessa: :

I love the structure of your poem, I write like this often...sometimes when you are in pain it is the only way you can put it on paper as the words pour from your heart. Absolutely wonderful...10! Dorothy

what a heartbreaking story- thank you for sharing this with us.

you have managed to capture your sadness very beautifully its a very tragic story.

Greenwolfe 1962 calls the vertical style you chose a chore. I agree with this, however I do not agree that this is a needless exercise. I believe that the structure in which you form your work is crucial to the atmosphere you wish to give writing (this usually only applies to poetry) . I found that the further I read on in this horribly tragic story, the more convinced I was that this was a bridge to tragedy built with as much heart and class as I've come across. An excellent poem told in a compelling format.

I'm glad you included the explanation at the end. I really wasn't sure I had the right meaning but I did. I really don't like this vertical word structure. It makes reading a real chore. A needless exercise. Your wording was excellant as it always is. GW62

some people have lily-of-a-day like existence -short but fill others life with joy nd their momory is etched till we ourselves depart one day. keep writing it is the best way to pay homage to your loved one. very touching

sweet! ~ thanks for sharing! always remember that not all things that has a happy ending starts happily... ;) I wish i could picture the smile on ur friend's face ;) i really adore the poem you know... -GanNi

That poem is very good, i enjoyed reading it

yeah this is a good one... i hope you will let go of her... better yet that youo have

i loved it soo much. real life makes good poetry doesnt it?

moo cow sad.but this a good poem

Sorry for your loss... the words are there but the formula or flow of words did not touch me in the way it should. The phrasing reads as though the writer was literally losing his mind while losing a dear friend

very raw and honest. very sad. i'm sorry for your loss, however long ago it was.

Nice one... full of emotions and senses.... keep on... u r a real great poet....