Monday, February 2, 2009

Coming Back To Home Comments

Rating: 3.8

Coming back to home so helpless and tired
No! No! Don’t touch me, I am soo wired
Ma eyes so heavy, ma arms so weak
Like someone thrown me off from top of the peak
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Ali Ahmed
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Greenwolfe 1962 13 February 2009

I really enjoyed this. It seems there is some nice humor there as well. I loved the last line. You certainly know the importance of a good ending. Well done! GW62

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Muhammad Ali 13 February 2009

Now where I should go........ or may I read another poem from PH. A poem with deep impression.... nice Ali

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sumaira .....ir 02 February 2009

nicely write... reall enjoyed......... + 8 4 u......... or jis ka koi nahe os ka tu khuda yara lol :)

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ata khan 02 February 2009

Wah zabrdast, beautiful. I feel related to it: -)

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