Monday, April 20, 2009

Comin' Thru The Grass Comments

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If a body meet a body comin' thru the grass
Should a body kiss a body and grab her by the ass?
—To tell you the truth,
—That sounds so uncouth,
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George Hunter
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 02 May 2009

I do like this- your verse so much better... a gentleman's touch. I like the flow too....Regards Cindy

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

i like how uv expressed it and the rhythm is perfect! outstanding!

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