Friday, August 22, 2014

Comforts In The Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mysterious poems, endless …words
Wisteria - windings on my mind.
The millponds ripple silently heard:
Distils, conspires with every rhyme.
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Mark Heathcote
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Terry Craddock 22 August 2014

You had me with the beauty of the first stanza Mysterious poems endless… words Wisteria - windings on my mind. The millponds ripple silently heard: Distils conspires with every rhyme. I also have spent much time thinking these thoughts, and I loved the last stanza twist, with the extra line 'In times of darkness: to fly like a bird.' now I do not wait for darkness I fly anyway, in darkness or in light :) 10+ Isn't the white page not yet smudged? The best of all conceived, never written yes this is truth and mystery

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