Comfortless Memories Comments

Mac, when you wrote this poem, did you imagine that the Dean of African dictatorship will have less than five years to succumb to his own 'gory glories'? ha ha ha, time has a way of dealing with issues. I like the poem, i i think that you need a little more effort to push the idea through and well.

well put...the hollow lives that power hungry people lead...

Very finely wrought - economy of metrical lines in couplets used to convey your message clearly. Keep writing - very good work

Very finely wrought - economy of metrical lines in couplets used to convey your message clearly. Keep writing - very good work

but reality is.............uncomfort...........