Sunday, September 9, 2012

Comfort Zone Comments

Rating: 4.5

When from its nest, the babyish sun
Nestles in my window, curls
Into my room, snuggles
Down into my blanket, cuddles
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Susanta Pattnayak
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 September 2014

Beautiful imagery of a sweet morning, in his own den. Look at the way he acknowledges what is done by his wife in the kitchen. Superb.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 September 2014

Beautiful imagery of a sweet morning, in his own den. Look at the way he acknowledges what is done by his wife in the kitchen. Superb.

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

what a poem.. the unfolding of the day.. well depicted!

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Meera Panigrahi 14 September 2012

cacophonous music of everyday

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Susanta Pattnayak

Susanta Pattnayak

Bhubaneswar, India
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