Night captures a darkness ink black, when sound
Takes from stillness tangibility. Emerging
Now beautiful gem-stars, which bring a rounded
Diamond brightness to night-time, and surging
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My dear friend and mentor Mr.s Mangiamele used to speak of 'little flashes of enlightenment'. I suspect this poem was inspired by one of those. It is the listening that is so important - the level of awareness in which the ego mind shuts down and that the soul emerges in all its glory. A beautiful poem, bright with stars! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Darkness, stillness and brightness(of stars) , trio sonata of night. Beautiful poem, Fay. Naseer
Night music indeed. It is in the comfort of stillness that true poetry is created. Wonderful, Fay. Always your friend, Sandra
Night gives way to the second life which is life of imagination in your poem. Lovely flow! Thanks for sharing and best wishes. A.
much beauty lies in this immobilized staining.....of heart and words.
As they race to my eye, then I lose track Of duality. One with the cosmos I am flying. With such beauty pain is lost. -- stunning words and imagery...lovely craft to read! ! ! 10
An imagery painted beauty my dear friend....beautifully delivered piece....you never fail to amaze me with your golden pen Fay.....stunning
' I fall up into space As they race to my eye, then I lose track Of duality. One with the cosmos I am flying. With such beauty pain is lost.' Stunning poem with beautiful imageries.10+
Stunning write Fay...nights spent staring at the stars can be so lovely....Fi 10++++
Beautiful imagery, nice composition and succeeding soaring the sky without pain. A lovely write!
Fay, this is beautiful, I mean really beautiful. Bob 10++