Friday, June 26, 2009

Comfort Of Stillness. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night captures a darkness ink black, when sound
Takes from stillness tangibility. Emerging
Now beautiful gem-stars, which bring a rounded
Diamond brightness to night-time, and surging
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Blackwell 09 July 2009

Fay, this is beautiful, I mean really beautiful. Bob 10++

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Alison Cassidy 08 July 2009

My dear friend and mentor Mr.s Mangiamele used to speak of 'little flashes of enlightenment'. I suspect this poem was inspired by one of those. It is the listening that is so important - the level of awareness in which the ego mind shuts down and that the soul emerges in all its glory. A beautiful poem, bright with stars! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 July 2009

Darkness, stillness and brightness(of stars) , trio sonata of night. Beautiful poem, Fay. Naseer

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Ron Flowers 05 July 2009

Fay, your beautiful poem takes me there. Ron

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2009

Night music indeed. It is in the comfort of stillness that true poetry is created. Wonderful, Fay. Always your friend, Sandra

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Yelena M. 05 July 2009

Night gives way to the second life which is life of imagination in your poem. Lovely flow! Thanks for sharing and best wishes. A.

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much beauty lies in this immobilized staining.....of heart and words.

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Eyan Desir 04 July 2009

A nice picture was paint with your words

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Lady Grace 02 July 2009

'flying. With such beauty pain is lost. '...that's good..

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Catrina Heart 28 June 2009

As they race to my eye, then I lose track Of duality. One with the cosmos I am flying. With such beauty pain is lost. -- stunning words and imagery...lovely craft to read! ! ! 10

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~ Jon London ~ 27 June 2009

An imagery painted beauty my dear friend....beautifully delivered piece....you never fail to amaze me with your golden pen Fay.....stunning

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

' I fall up into space As they race to my eye, then I lose track Of duality. One with the cosmos I am flying. With such beauty pain is lost.' Stunning poem with beautiful imageries.10+

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Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009

Stunning write Fay...nights spent staring at the stars can be so lovely....Fi 10++++

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Ejaz Khan 26 June 2009

Beautiful imagery, nice composition and succeeding soaring the sky without pain. A lovely write!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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