Friday, June 15, 2007

Comfort In Pain Comments

Rating: 2.7

I was lost in numbness for years
I was running from pain
but then I became trapped in the freezing darkness
where I was constantly numb
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Hailey Evens 01 July 2007

I know what its like to be totally and absolutely numb, and I also know that pain is the anchor stopping me from being a zombie. Your poem expresses the words that I have felt for a long time now. Thank you for writing comfort in pain.

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fallen beauty 27 June 2007

Was this inspired by Pain-3dg...Anyway...This is very good...I liked it a lot. I can relate to a lot of your poems...Great Job...and thanks for the comment

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broken soul 16 June 2007

this is such a painful piece.. but in my case.. i think i rather feel numb.. than feel the pain.. write more..

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Edna Javelosa 15 June 2007

nice piece..an acknowledgment that there is 'comfort in pain'...'when happiness doesn’t work '..

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