Friday, September 4, 2009

Comfort In Blue Comments

Rating: 4.9

Midnight blue backsplash ripples.
Night guardians blink and wink.
Sleepy moon wearing her teal shawl bows.
I, wearing snug denims and azure t-shirt sip the blue martini in my blue garden.
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Michelle Kafka
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Aziz Alkaabi 14 September 2009

This is enchanting..............and very creative.

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Marieta Maglas 05 September 2009

wonderful prosaic symbolistic poem about blue.....touching.10+++++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 September 2009

Love through eternity cascades down upon two lovers like the clear blue waterfall. This is my comfort in blue, , , , , , , , , , , , florence of beauty scintillates by the grace in blue, as cadence of fountain flows by heart to merge in by entirety, ingenious by imagery yet utterly passionate by the gleams over powering,10++++, .thanks for sharing

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Afzal Shauq 05 September 2009

Love through eternity cascades down upon two lovers like the clear blue waterfall. This is my comfort in blue. a great phlosophical way written poem.. there are historical, factual and on groeund realities related references and the color and colorful life have given new meanings and i believe that what you said is true and agree with it..liked the way you express..well done..really good job..10/10

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Patrick A. Martin 04 September 2009

Greatuse of a colour to sew together many different senerios. an interestering idea that works well 10

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Michelle Kafka

Michelle Kafka

Manitoba, Canada
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