Friday, November 11, 2005

Comfort Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tried to talk to him one Winter
when my mother was in the hospital
He was sitting in the parlor chair
taking a puff of his Camel cigarette
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Peter A. Crowther 27 January 2006

What a heart-breaking poem - a young girl fantasizing about the love she did not receive (but should have) from her father

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Bill Smith 12 November 2005

enjoyed the read, Iike the style of your writing

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Cj Heck 12 November 2005

Well done - this one came from your heart and soul, Louise. Hugs to you, CJ

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