Thursday, January 28, 2010

Comfort Comments

Rating: 1.5

Build up a wall made of stone,
Then take it apart on your own,

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Casey A Geiger
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A garden enclosed, Then remove the wall, fragrance exceedes the boundary. Comfort in one self is inner peace, but also good to extend that peace! Lovely little poem! ; D

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 28 January 2010

This is strong and cutting, yes the poem is full of emotional intensity but the last lines intrigues and leaves the reader with a question.10+

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Casey A Geiger

Casey A Geiger

Dover Foxcroft ME
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