Thursday, April 2, 2009

Comfertably Numb Comments

Rating: 3.0

I have become comfertably numb
I can feel no pain.
The smile I wair is painted on
The laugh I force its fake.
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lilly mandrell
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Sameer Ahmed 08 April 2009

A very intangible and nonconcrete emotions are the essence of the poem...10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Aiden Florence 03 April 2009

As abstract as it may be, the flow makes it a wonderful piece.

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