Friday, February 22, 2008

Comes The Changes Comments

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When the days are full of fun,
Bright, warm with a lovely sun,
Suddenly comes the changes,
There’s a mist across the moon.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 27 March 2008

A very emotive poem Ernestine. Lovely work. Andrew

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Dee Daffodil 02 March 2008

How true Ernestine...life is full of things that shatter the things that matter. Excellent piece of poetry! ! Very lovely! Hugs, Dee

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Lynda Robson 26 February 2008

When love comes we see things clearly, as Duncan says there is no mist with you, a lovely poem, thanks, . Lynda xxx

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Mary Gordley 23 February 2008

Ernestine, I love the way the final line plays out. Love, comes in and clears away the mist, what a beautiful thought. Thanks for this sweet poem.

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Duncan Wyllie 22 February 2008

There is no mist with you Ernestine, just a brilliant veiw for the on-looker, , Love duncan X

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