Thursday, July 19, 2007

Comes As Soothing As Good News Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I age in times ageless,
With those afraid to leave their youth!
I find myself discovering a wealth,
Of understanding I am handed and pursue.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Joseph Daly 20 July 2007

This is wonderful Lawrence. The phontec rhymes and their placements shows that you have a great ear. I love the theme of this but also the way that the poem is executed. The language is straight-forward, but is skillfully aplied. This would sound brilliant read alound.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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