Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Comely Invitation. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come, lively lord.
inside my boudoir
you will find plenty
of pleasuring,
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Fay Slimm
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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

wowwww.what a marvelous poetry...great theme...10

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Very provocative Fay. It is different and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Exceptionally old-fashioned and she a different class to who she is wanting to seduce. Great work! 10 Karin

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Carol Gall 02 December 2009

great fay i like this its so good 10

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Patti Masterman 02 December 2009

Yes I think it has a deeper meaning! The ending surprised me I admit. What a clever idea and your words carried it home so perfectly. Thanks for the smile this morning.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 December 2009

i'm still quite puzzled in this poem whether it has a deeper meaning or is it just like this. but anyway... nice write! very good!

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Fay Slimm

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