Come Young Pirates, Part I - Around, Around The Pilgrim Sun Comments
'Come young pirates, let's drink our fill!
Let's test our hearts, let's test our skill!
Fortune's current will lead our way
Look no more to the crimson bay.
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You are so authentic, you poetic pirate. You set your readers to sailing oceans beneath magic stars. The visuals are perfect, the verbs move us from hemisphere to hemisphere! Absolutely beautiful.10++++++++++++++++++ and so sailing along in my fav list
Aye Susan, A poetess if ever one there be Compliments this old pirate of the sea. May worlds of adventure comprise your verse, May beautiful rhymes in your poems give birth To the progeny in each written line As they leave your breath, as they sail through time.
Thank you so much Kostas. I have been away a long time. It feels good to be back and writing. Endeavor on my good man. Endeavor on!
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7/21/2025 11:20:28 AM # 1.0.0
Oh Captain Cur, its already in a new year and you still bravely sailing and never a second regretted to fight the fiery sea. The wisdom you commanded make the monster waves bow... But i send my secret message to you through sea gulls, dont chase the horizon lines because u never reached there, it leads u around..pilgrim around the spherical seas... But captain, keep your journey safe. let the pirates down when you rule the oceans!
Thank you Soul. No better way to start the new year than to begin writing new pirate adventures. Thanks for your comment and continued support my friend!