Of Guanche women; it was said,
adorned in jewels, fruits and palms;
'quite irresistible to their men.'
Known as a hardy race,
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Yes you write your story in poetic flow. It is just beautiful. Well penned. Encaptivating to see the caring nature of the queen.
Great story can't wait to read the complete story. Every time I read your poem the picture come alive to me as if it is happening in front of me.10***
Brilliant extension of the previous parts but it could be more precise if the poet could split the part shorter than its current appearance because many readers can't have patience to go through the long text
Keep on travelling us with your magnificent poems dear Captain!
I thoroughly enjoyed this full complete story about the original Canary Islands Inhabitants, the emphasis on the Guanches women. Very interesting because of the captive composed poem. Much enjoyed!