Friday, March 19, 2021

Come Young Pirates, Constantinople Waits Behind The Scenes, (X X I X) Comments

Rating: 4.8

On these gilded waters caged within my mind
My prayers remonstrate, pleading for a sign;
An unremarkable life is a wretched foe
The shadow of its failure creeping slow,
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bri edwards 20 March 2021

line 6: maybe 'day's', not 'days'? ;)

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Poetic Sky 20 March 2021

X-cellent poem Captain.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 March 2021

You have captured the richness of history in glorious imagery and captivatingly beautiful language. To my Poem List.

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Kostas Lagos 19 March 2021

Let the pirates sail!

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