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A fantastic write sir! Learning process for me gets enriched.

Great writing. Liked the way you drew the two worlds- one of fantasy and lies, the other one of profound silence and nothingness. Reality always stays concealed behind the mask of fantasies and alluring temptations....great work sir....

Beautiful poem... I liked reading it..

Valsa says it is exaggeration of things diametrically polar and soon adds it is a great write... no it isn`t. Hazel identifies the overblown optimism and is then provoked in thoughts... it is ironic. Please, call the spade a spade.

Two exaggerated way of looking at life.... as Hazel has put it, one too glossy to be real and the other too gray to be dreary! A kind of moderate perception... a golden mean is the one that would be the real depiction of life! A great write.... but 'a sad lyric'! !

An intriguing write of two different attitudes to life, the optimist and the pessimist, I get a sense of mental illness with her overblown optimism, a brilliant write that is very thought provoking!

Lines are captivating- - - - -My canvas is my mind and my brush is my reason And I paint often a pale picture of our times. Very nice Sir.You deserve 10+++.