Monday, September 29, 2008

Come With Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blinked and stunned
By your radiant essence
Filled by a dark room
Candescent presents
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Adam Day
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Fay Slimm 14 October 2008

Your first stanza opens the poem very well, and the appeal stays all the way. Good flow and metre. from Fay.

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