Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Come Up The Slope Rider Friend Comments

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Keeping my foot on the pedal has to
be done to keep this bike
on the path.
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017

Yes, survival of the fittest told from the seat of a difficult bike. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Brookes 12 November 2017

A funny and erudite piece enjoyed thanks

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Savita Tyagi 07 November 2017

If I could have the wisdom of a coin, I would jingle in whisper mode. This poem is so deep with its metaphor. So much is said about our paycheck to paycheck life style, exploitation by rich and powerful and our own desire to excell trapping us fully. I hope my understanding is correct but appreciate it very much for what I understood it to be. Thanks for sharing it Sarah.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 07 November 2017

Made my day! ! ! So crafty and clear.

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