Sunday, February 14, 2016

Come To The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let's fly together to the world of love
Where heart is pure and mind is sure
The beauty of nature still beguile
where bloom of flowers are still fresh and live
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 09 March 2019

Great poetic expressions Where promises are fulfilled and words are honoured Where life is a joy and living is a pleasure.....

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Darren Jkoeryo 30 July 2016

Love is in the air man.

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Nosheen Irfan 14 February 2016

Where murmur of the heart is heard so clear...wowwww. Beautiful imagery throughout the poem.10

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Souren Mondal 14 February 2016

We all should have a world like this.. Love always is far better than all the other 'bad' emotions around the world that are corrupting humanity.. Thanks for sharing Asim.. A beautiful poem.

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Valsa George 14 February 2016

That will be a wonderful world that any one will long to be in! Very poetic with a smooth flow!

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 February 2016

Enter into the world so sweet! Where the laws rule for the rights of all. Yes, we need true love on this earth. Able to put things right. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M. Asim Nehal

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