Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Come To The Right Comments

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Shun the evil, follow the right
Kick the devil command on right
Life in death, they preach them
Kill the innocent they teach them
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S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari
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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

A great poem with a courageous Poets Notes. Congratulations for writing such a nice poem and thanks for sharing it.

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S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari 12 September 2014

Thanks to all my friends. :)

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Ramesh Rai 13 October 2013

Life is obscure, minds are gloomy No one secure, hearts say sadly Life in death, they preach them Kill the innocent they teach them Open your eyes with gentle sight Shun the evil, come to the right a poem composed with beautiful flow and with a great message

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

A Great poem with a great message. Loved it. Keep writing.

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Saadat Tahir 19 August 2013

deeply felt and pan human thought the poets notes do justice to a an otherwise lucid and clear write yes the knowledge divide in our societal whirlpool is far dangerous then the other divides...so a great job at trying to bridge that....by whatever means one can good write liked

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 14 August 2013

A very good poem with a very nice idea.

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S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari

S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari

Peshawar, Pakistan.
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