Come To Reality Mother Comments

Deep insight into the many plagues of life..and what future damage it can cause to those around you.....very well penned....you're wise beyond your years dear Demi....keep exploring

It sounds like you have a real head on your shoulders.A very good poem to be written by a girl your age.Very very good.By the way thanks for reading one of mine

It seems you have more sense than others, there will always be people who will value you and you will find them, we never know what is around the corner of life.GBBS

my tyoung friend, I pray this is not your fate. If so, I pray that she does coem to reality.. along with all the moms liek her out there.

Difficult content, conveyed with dexterity and grace, well done.

it was very good10+++

This is very good... it flows so smoothly... sad poem hugs cc