Thursday, September 24, 2009

Come To My Arms Comments

Rating: 5.0

The leaves have fallen
A mild breeze plays
under an oak tree I sit to see
Your memory of past days
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vittal vandavasu
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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

Among my favourites.. Your pain lay between the words.. Almost touchable. I like your work..

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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

Among my favourites.. Your pain lay between the words.. Almost touchable. I like your work..

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Eyan Desir 01 October 2009

....Well written I felt some words didnt go hand to hand But overall I love this poem... well written... Are you sure that you're older?

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Jazz Annis 29 September 2009

that was a poem worth reading 10 very emotional i could feel your emotions as i read on in the poem very very well written! ! =)

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Anusha Subramanian 29 September 2009

A nice loving, Emotional poem.. I like it..10plus

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Philip Winchester 29 September 2009

Your Poetry belies your years, you are destined to become a Great Poet, with an ability such as this. Move from the Graveyards of Sorrow out into the Sunshine. Sorry it`s much brighter in the Sun beams but more will grow. As will your skills of interpretation of everyday beautiful subjects. Kind Regards. Philip

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 September 2009

beautiful & emotional poem, I loved reading it...10+

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Maya Hershey 26 September 2009

well i must admit... its a very interesting poem... nice words... beautiful dictions...10+ good work.

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Mubeen Sadhika 26 September 2009

Good expression. Nicely written. Deserves 10+++++++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

emotions of love well expressed in this poem...10

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Seema Chowdhury 24 September 2009

very nice and emotional poem. life is a series of emotions. we see both ups and downs. so don't give up just wait for your turn. it will come bck to you with smiles. take care read some of my new poems too. i just submitted 4 new poems. they are on pg 1,2 & 3

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Seema Gupta 24 September 2009

'very loving expression' regards

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