The leaves have fallen
A mild breeze plays
under an oak tree I sit to see
Your memory of past days
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Among my favourites.. Your pain lay between the words.. Almost touchable. I like your work..
....Well written I felt some words didnt go hand to hand But overall I love this poem... well written... Are you sure that you're older?
that was a poem worth reading 10 very emotional i could feel your emotions as i read on in the poem very very well written! ! =)
Your Poetry belies your years, you are destined to become a Great Poet, with an ability such as this. Move from the Graveyards of Sorrow out into the Sunshine. Sorry it`s much brighter in the Sun beams but more will grow. As will your skills of interpretation of everyday beautiful subjects. Kind Regards. Philip
well i must admit... its a very interesting poem... nice words... beautiful dictions...10+ good work.
emotions of love well expressed in this poem...10
very nice and emotional poem. life is a series of emotions. we see both ups and downs. so don't give up just wait for your turn. it will come bck to you with smiles. take care read some of my new poems too. i just submitted 4 new poems. they are on pg 1,2 & 3
Among my favourites.. Your pain lay between the words.. Almost touchable. I like your work..