Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Come To Me Once More Comments

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Dark as a night
When moon had spent
Her days twenty nine
My life without you.
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Jahan Zeb
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Payal Parande 09 May 2013

how flattering and sweet, this poem shows the deep love you have toward this person, an amazing piece indeed

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Free Bird 07 May 2013

nice poem. hope that person come to you soon with in moonlight

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Farah Ilyas 07 May 2013

once again, a poem full of sigh ness written by a poet Jahan zaib...fully emotional poem has a desire & craving for her beloved to be come back...hmmmm once again your poem has made me sad...: -( great....

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Gajanan Mishra 07 May 2013

you are my moon, my light. good write. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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