Monday, May 13, 2013

Come To Me (Like The Evening Breeze) Comments

Rating: 4.6

Come to my life
Like an evening wind
Lingers me a soft touch
In every moves of its sway
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2018

What a fantastic expression! Like the evening breeze we go Touch our hearts with a soul Like the evening breeze That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze If you feel You'll see A beautiful metaphorical poem relating to love and soul shared astutely.10

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Amitava Sur 14 July 2014

A beautiful song with the evening breeze, very soothing and inspiring one.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 August 2013

Like an Evening Breeze, this song had touched my heart, What can be more beautiful, when we are blessed with such beautiful Evening Breeze.. And which touched your soul, and a fantastic song is flowing out.... Lovely write...Loved it.

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

beautiful poem. very soft and inspiring like the evening breeze. nice imagery

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Nassy Fesharaki 08 June 2013

I like your breaking points, diagonals and then, trunks that keep the pine tree shape firm. I have many poems like that, half of the tree, half of the house, then the column, tunk and foundation...

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Valerie Dohren 30 May 2013

Lovely as ever Soul - enchanting write.

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Captain Cur 30 May 2013

Beautiful ending to a spectacularly pretty poem. Loved the melody and the words.

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Terry O'leary 29 May 2013

Very beautiful words... I'm sure the song would be beautiful too...

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Spiritual Seeker 29 May 2013

Beautiful poem...as cool as the evening breeze! Pure honey will stay sweet...though many years kept, the healing stays. Excellent poem, thanks for sharing again.

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Kee Thampi 28 May 2013

I like this poem..... That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze

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Cosmic Dreamer 25 May 2013

Just when I think I can spill my emotions upon the page with such beauty, I read your words and realise... I still have some work to do... Keep them coming my friend...

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Shahzia Batool 23 May 2013

You are talented that's why you have sung a soulful song! ! !

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David Wood 17 May 2013

I can feel the warm evening breeze and the hope in this lovely poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 May 2013

'Tis a hope enveloped in faith! ! ! ! Top markssss my soul

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Nader Baheri 16 May 2013

superb.the poem is full of hope and light and song is also cute especially the sound of wind.creative and cute.as the whole poem flows.~nb

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Poetheart Morgan 16 May 2013

I liked it very much better with you singing! ! ! ! The music, the lyrics, loved so much. That is Soul! ! !

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R.j. Wynn 16 May 2013

This is hot! I bet, you bet, you need some cool breezes.

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2013

You've touched my life Like the evening breeze Where destiny lend me you That swaying our hearts blue... nice flow of poem as well as of song is just due to deep love, sentiments, feelings & emotions you have put in the composition Like the evening breeze we go Touch our hearts with a soul Like the evening breeze That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze If you feel You'll see.. one divine supremacy of love is, you wouldn't be alone even in solitude at all.....great one

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Jahan Zeb 14 May 2013

Nice song. I would love to hear that but I know you would not send me that.

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Paul Brookes 14 May 2013

The wind carries your words and gently settles on my soul. Beautiful poem brought a tear to my eye. BB : O))

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