Come to my life
Like an evening wind
Lingers me a soft touch
In every moves of its sway
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A beautiful song with the evening breeze, very soothing and inspiring one.
Like an Evening Breeze, this song had touched my heart, What can be more beautiful, when we are blessed with such beautiful Evening Breeze.. And which touched your soul, and a fantastic song is flowing out.... Lovely write...Loved it.
beautiful poem. very soft and inspiring like the evening breeze. nice imagery
I like your breaking points, diagonals and then, trunks that keep the pine tree shape firm. I have many poems like that, half of the tree, half of the house, then the column, tunk and foundation...
Beautiful ending to a spectacularly pretty poem. Loved the melody and the words.
Very beautiful words... I'm sure the song would be beautiful too...
Beautiful poem...as cool as the evening breeze! Pure honey will stay sweet...though many years kept, the healing stays. Excellent poem, thanks for sharing again.
I like this poem..... That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze
Just when I think I can spill my emotions upon the page with such beauty, I read your words and realise... I still have some work to do... Keep them coming my friend...
I can feel the warm evening breeze and the hope in this lovely poem.
superb.the poem is full of hope and light and song is also cute especially the sound of wind.creative and cute.as the whole poem flows.~nb
I liked it very much better with you singing! ! ! ! The music, the lyrics, loved so much. That is Soul! ! !
You've touched my life Like the evening breeze Where destiny lend me you That swaying our hearts blue... nice flow of poem as well as of song is just due to deep love, sentiments, feelings & emotions you have put in the composition Like the evening breeze we go Touch our hearts with a soul Like the evening breeze That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze If you feel You'll see.. one divine supremacy of love is, you wouldn't be alone even in solitude at all.....great one
Nice song. I would love to hear that but I know you would not send me that.
The wind carries your words and gently settles on my soul. Beautiful poem brought a tear to my eye. BB : O))
What a fantastic expression! Like the evening breeze we go Touch our hearts with a soul Like the evening breeze That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze If you feel You'll see A beautiful metaphorical poem relating to love and soul shared astutely.10