Come To Me Comments

excellent, well written. but the person in this poem does not want someone to love them out of pity for certain for we all deserve genuine love, , , , , , ,

I usually don't have the patience to read long poems (this is me being truthful) but you managed to keep my attention with this one. I like the simple way you have expressed things, the words are expressed form the heart. I hope the anguish ends for you soon. If you have the person's phone number, I'll call them and ask them to put you out of your misery :) Just kidding, if that happened, we would not get to read these words! Peace, Aisha