Come to me when you feel helplessness
With tiredness and unhappiness on the face
I shall take your care and nurture
Be assured of safe refuge here
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Thanks for your invitation. I think you have done well with this piece.
Dear Sir, By reading the title of the poem itself, readers would find solace. When I read the poem, I am reminded of the following lines from Wordsworth's poem The Solitary Reaper': No Nightingale did ever chaunt More welcome notes to weary bands Of travellers in some shady haunt, Among Arabian Sands: . Sir, every line of your poem seems heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai K. Sadasivan, Chennai Aug 10,2012
Abdul Wahab beautiful is yr poem, more beautiful is yr wisdom of rhyme, and marvellous are the thoughts expressed craftly in an exquiste poem, i love it.. 11 hours ago · Like
A very deep and impressive poem. Our time here is short in human form. Your beliefs are strong of a better world, as you write, Come on my son to a original fold, This is your permanent refuge and world. Great words of faith.
Incredible and Beautiful and true and vibrant in so many ways i can describe the soul that writes with such profoundness. Sublime!
It's a gem of a poem Sir. I really am in shortage of adjectives to express my feelings after reading. Thank you so much. Will read all of yours one by one. I sincerely would like to invite your attention to my humble contributions and post your most valuable comments which will help me the actual worth of my efforts as a budding writer.
Queeny Gona Nurturing is very vital and it is met with HIM. God is God of two parties! I liked these points most in this write up! Thanks for sharing it Hasmukh Mehta a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Come to me when you feel helplessness With tiredness and unhappiness on the face
Vijay Gupta very nice 2 minutes ago ·