Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 8, 2012

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Come to me when you feel helplessness
With tiredness and unhappiness on the face
I shall take your care and nurture
Be assured of safe refuge here
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

Vijay Gupta very nice 2 minutes ago ·

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Godfrey Morris 11 August 2012

Thanks for your invitation. I think you have done well with this piece.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Dear Sir, By reading the title of the poem itself, readers would find solace. When I read the poem, I am reminded of the following lines from Wordsworth's poem The Solitary Reaper': No Nightingale did ever chaunt More welcome notes to weary bands Of travellers in some shady haunt, Among Arabian Sands: . Sir, every line of your poem seems heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. With regards, K. Sadasivan, Chennai K. Sadasivan, Chennai Aug 10,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Abdul Wahab beautiful is yr poem, more beautiful is yr wisdom of rhyme, and marvellous are the thoughts expressed craftly in an exquiste poem, i love it.. 11 hours ago · Like

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Captain Cur 08 August 2012

A very deep and impressive poem. Our time here is short in human form. Your beliefs are strong of a better world, as you write, Come on my son to a original fold, This is your permanent refuge and world. Great words of faith.

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Kasia Fedyk 08 August 2012

Incredible and Beautiful and true and vibrant in so many ways i can describe the soul that writes with such profoundness. Sublime!

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Indranil Bhaduri 08 August 2012

It's a gem of a poem Sir. I really am in shortage of adjectives to express my feelings after reading. Thank you so much. Will read all of yours one by one. I sincerely would like to invite your attention to my humble contributions and post your most valuable comments which will help me the actual worth of my efforts as a budding writer.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Queeny Gona Nurturing is very vital and it is met with HIM. God is God of two parties! I liked these points most in this write up! Thanks for sharing it Hasmukh Mehta a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Come to me when you feel helplessness With tiredness and unhappiness on the face

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