Friday, February 5, 2010

Come To Me Comments

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When you want to cry come to me.
When you feel alone come to me.
When you feel like life is too hard and you want to end it all
Come to me.
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LOUIS SHEFFIELD
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Vance Gilmore 13 February 2010

Great job, Louis! You are so supportive and want to help ease other people's pain because you know what it feels like to suffer. Its nice to see you using rhymes. Keep it up!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 February 2010

This is heartwarming and well-written.10++++

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kitty in love 05 February 2010

I know your words are tru... and thats what i like about you!

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