Do you want to be like me?
Tell me do you want to be?
Do you want to see the things
The way I want you to see?
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very nice poem, very nice feeling, we are mankind, have different life, but we are in one world to know each other.happy life. greeting. rashees
Sourav, great write... I like the concept. I've often wondered what it would be like to walk in someone else's shoes, even for just a day... what an amazing experience that would be. Well done! ! Brian
Im not too good at complementing poems, I only write but this poem in my opinion is very deep. It touches and relates well to alot of people. I can see many people in my life including myself saying this to themselves. I think about things that way alot. I just never could have put it the way of you did. Good Job, great poem and thanks for sharing this with us.
Oh! I'm sure it will be strange to see what you see and to be in your shoes. Nice questioning poem! Preets
very nice poem, very nice feeling, we are mankind, have different life, but we are in one world to know each other.happy life. greeting. rasheed