Saturday, October 26, 2013

'Come To Australia' Comments

Rating: 4.9

Come to Australia
If you don't mind the odd fly
With the Aussie salute...
You will get by
...
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Lyn Paul
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2020

The title and the recurring lines, " Come To Australia " make this write powerful and mellifluous to read. A well crafted poem with great imagery. A wonderful tribute to the beautiful Australia. Top Marks, Lyn. Loved it!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2020

A wonderful poem that beautifully paints a great and beautiful country. Your love for Australia is indeed captivating, makes me want to visit a one of a kind place where wild things grow.

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Nigel Norton 02 December 2015

LOL....you work for the tourist board old girl... Enjoyed reading it Lyn NN

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Ken E Hall 13 September 2015

Great patriotic poem which all will agree with its perfect comment, the land of OZ is second to none...every day here is a blessing...are we all so lucky...we need the flies but not at barbecues! ...regards

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 July 2014

A Beautiful poem from your pen.. A heartfelt invitation. Who would not like to visit and see the Aussie weather and natures beauty, after reading such a beautiful poem...Definitely, I would like to visit Australia, heard a lot about it. Loved it.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 January 2014

Thanks for the invitation. I've already been there in the year 2000, visited Sydney, Canberra and Perth. 'Come to Australia for our pure, clean air You can smell the roses, pollution is rare' - True.

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Marvin Brato 01 November 2013

Worth the read...I dream of migrating to Australia, I wish it shall come true!

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Danny Draper 27 October 2013

An advert for tourism or a loving affirmation of our home and its relaxed and beautiful qualities. Well said in this piece.

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2013

Great welcome to Australia, hope all Aussie people like you, if so, then it must be really good! hahahaha to your note..lip balm _Soul

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 October 2013

a wonderful poetic invitation to an amazingly rich country! thanks Lyn for this beautiful glimpse.

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Somanathan Iyer 26 October 2013

Nice poetic invitation. Australia is a great country which is attracting more people than US. You should visit natural places of Australia and should write about them.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 October 2013

Thank you for the invitation. Nice poem Lyn Paul..

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