Come soon, come soon,
O rain, my grand-daughter
Aaeeshanee is calling you
Come again and again.
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This poem has kind of an Indian feel to me, and that is good.
Rain a subject that have created number of poems by world renowned poets and still the poem written by the poet is a special to the readers as it is so nice.
Thanks for your encouraging comment about my poem Family. I have read your five most recent works which are fascinating as usual.
I think it should be wabns instead of want, but anyway this poem makes me look forward to being a grandfather soon!
beautiful rain, Aashanee loves rain..