Wednesday, April 4, 2018

Come Sitwith Me And Listen Comments

Rating: 2.5

Come sit with my a listen
to the tale you'l have to hear
About a young mans story
Of loneliness and fear.
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Bharati Nayak 16 April 2018

Just take a moment to yourself and do whats in your dream. Because you have only one chance in life before you go unseen. - - - - - Yes, we have only one chance- -this precious life to pursue our dream- - Let this dream be ours rather than others; dream.

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Rajnish Manga 09 April 2018

This goes into MyPoemList for its sheer intensity of thought and honesty. The challenges and the upheavals in life are real but the dreams may not be satisfying. The poem may be short but has the promise of an epic. Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 April 2018

Now this is the life he dreamed of from the moment of his birth. But sadly he passed away that day and is buried in the earth. Touching lines.

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Practicing Poetess 08 April 2018

A lovely poem about not waiting too long to chase your dreams.

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