'Come Quietly' Comments

Edge of the moon is shining Even the stars to wake sleeping doors chain quitely Be hiding in the arms of sleep................................. quest of spumes riffles by shining moon floats in air to delve mirth from hued blue at times passion peeks into room of reason lest jingle may calling from mango grove..................utterly inspiring, yet passionate, wrought ingenious by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

I will opened the door of heart You come quietly peeping in my eyes to live Ages in a singal moment a sweet and very meaningful poem with rich idea and expression is very much poetic too..well done 10/10