Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, January 22, 2010

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Rating: 4.7

My sincere prayers
Coming from different layers
Inner outer core of heart
Feeling very nice from start
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Chand Shikari 14 July 2010

My sincere prayers Coming from different layers Inner outer core of heart Feeling very nice from start....nice to come out....10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 January 2010

A poem full of sound advices how to come out and feel happy at the end.

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William Sicaju 28 January 2010

I like this poem alot. I recently got serious about writing and I hope I will get to a point were my poetry gets this good. It very insperational.

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Adam Reed 26 January 2010

great choice to write a poem on considering your readers. whether that was advice to yourself or not. you've helped out some of the lucky few who got to read this. good show =)

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Katellyne Baker 26 January 2010

i like it...so much about freedom and it all makes so much sence.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 January 2010

yeah, sometimes freedom is something hard to have but something worth fighting for because all of us should be free people... thanks for sharing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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