Tuesday, June 6, 2017

Come Out Please Comments

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Come on my child!
Come out of the pool,
bathing time is over.
Don't you see your father orbiting us
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Khalid Saifullah 23 October 2018

A great thoughtful poem.................

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

Indeed Valsa is absolutely correct; we are our worst enemy and to everything living and non living. Thank you sir

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Valsa George 18 June 2017

Man's worst enemy is man..... the worst enemy of animals too! One has to be conscious of the dangers lurking around and behind.... A Beautiful reminder!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 June 2017

YOU SIR Always E X C EL

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Bharati Nayak 07 June 2017

Beware of the animal that walks on two legs - - - - - - -A poignant write about the decreasing human values.The greediness has turned man into beast.

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