Come One Dark And Rainy Night Comments
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Come one dark and rainy night
he watched them come and go
both outside the windshield
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A deeply poignant and gripping poem. The superb imagery and beautifully woven words made me feel I am in this scary scene. Excellent write. Top Marks and to my Poem List.it
Hey, this is dark and scary stuff! I didn't know you had it in you. Five stars!
Dear Susan, I hope you and your family May have a Very Wonderful and Very Merry Christmas! .. May God bless dear! .. Always! ..
Rebecca! I hope your Christmas was warm with love and full of joy and showered with blessings! ! !
Danger, evil, sin! .. Quite darkening! .. Very well and powerfully expressed! .. 5 ++++++++................................
Such a contrast to the beautiful season it was written in, wasn't it? I thank you for reading it and finding it powerful! And thank you for the five star rating, my dear!
its grills gleaming like hungry teeth......significant.....thank u, dear poetess......anjandev roy.
Anjandev--it looks like I failed to respond to your comment or that PH has failed to print it.
Just in case I missed your comment, allow me to repeat my thanks for your time and consideration!
This poem: Danger, Evil, Sin: it is both the Reality and fantasy in the form of depicting the reality of dread without diving into the results, leads to psychological tension and phobia, we do not know what happens next, as the poet left the completion of the poetry to the reader, this poem is of high quality and excellent in its poetic aspect has got Literary value in terms of technique and formulation, thanks to our talented, experienced poetess with 5 bright stars.
Soran! Thank you for the depth of your comments. They always let me know where my poetry is effective and what you find of value in its technique and emotional effect. Thank you for those 5 bright stars, my friend. May they help me find my way!
very well and unique poetic metaphore and simile can be found in this master pice such as: dark and rainy soul. The rain drumming on the metal roof its grills gleaming like hungry teeth
Thank you for pointing out the phrases that worked for you, you are a writer's best friend, you know.
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7/31/2025 12:19:10 PM # 1.0.0
This was a shock. It has frightened me a bit but above all Bravo!